Ginobili vs. Dracula, Chapter 5
Three losses in a row, each by a narrow margin. Richard Jefferson did not join the Spurs to just compete. “It's about winning," he whined as he slammed the car door and kicked the gravel driveway of his newly rented San Antonio home.
"I can help your team, RJ." A breath tender but cold lilted in Jefferson's ear. He looked up to see her standing on his sunflower welcome mat. Her auburn hair twisted about her like the branches of a winter willow. "Open the door and invite me in," she whispered.
The cold breath on his neck erupted into a dust devil that whirled around him. A slice of northeastern wind screamed through the live oaks. "Invite me in!" she commanded. She walked toward him now, quicker with every step. Every light on the street blacked out at once.
Bonk!
The neighborhood kids laughed when their Nerf football bounced off of RJ's head.
Jefferson roused himself from the driveway and touched his face, feeling indentations from the gravel. He looked down to see his shirt ripped open, buttons missing, but the silver crucifix, a gift from his missionary parents, still hung around his neck. Did he sleep here all night? What time was it?
"Ghost in the Graveyard?" "No ghost!" Childish voices screamed from inside bushes and behind parked cars.
Twilight. The game! He jumped to his feet, ran to his house, threw on the first clean thing he could grab. After finding his keys in the grass, he sped to the SBC Center.
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Assistant coach Hank Egan looked at RJ incredulously." Are you wearing a Bucks uniform?" RJ turned red. Whoops. Egan just shook his head. "Change and meet the team in the film room."
RJ snuck into the empty chair in the back as inconspicuously as possible for a someone 6'7". Popovitch stood in front of a room of concentrating Spurs. The diagram on the white board behind behind Pop did not look like any basketball play RJ had ever seen. It was more like a cave painting of the sun: a circle emitting fourteen lines with a point in the center. Next to Pop at the front of room Manu sat in street clothes, eyes shut.
Popovich finally spoke, “We just have to stay the course." Pop looked directly at RJ now, “Stay focused on the learning part."
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It was Pau Gasol's first game back from injury, but the ovations were tepid. Someone else had returned to the Staples Center.
He strode along the court side seats with 1:15 left in the 1st Quarter. His eyes glared red at the Lakers bench. Phil Jackson whistled a timeout, but he ignored his team when they jogged from the court -- Jackson huddled with the security personel instead. Following Jackson's instructions, two immense guards walked court side.
"Mr. Nicholson, this is not your seat." The gargantuan men pulled the movie star up like a naughty puppy. His eyebrows shot up over his sunglasses. He only struggled for a second before remembering he stood before 10,000 eyes and hundreds of cameras. On Jackson's nod, the men allowed Nicholson to walk into the unlit tunnel on his own accord.
The seat belonged to a tall man in vintage black Armani slacks and black Silvano Lattanzi sneakers with black stripes Those who dared to look at his face remember only vertigo and a feeling of loss. The photographers respectfully turned their cameras elsewhere. The lens that strayed caught only a black smudge, an inverted overexposure.
The dark Prince gestured with a half raised forefinger, its nail a polished claw. The game resumed.
"It's like tomb in here," Lakers broadcast announcer Joel Meyers said and shivered. "Dub in some crowd noise," he instructed the production crew. Joel starred at a teleprompter as he had for seven years since leaving San Antonio, calm and peppy, but for the persistent shaking of his left hand.
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great job
I really would like to know how you learned how to write this well and why you started this
It interests me
There are no weapons of mass destruction in Iraq Chuck Norris lives in Texas
PEN, you really need to provide some insight into your twisted mind. Recced.
Straight from the No-Stat Zone to your computer!
Dunkin' Cheerleaders
OK, two points:
“I can help your team, RJ.” A breath tender but cold lilted in Jefferson’s ear. He looked up to see her standing on his sunflower welcome mat. Her auburn hair twisted about her like the branches of a winter willow. “Open the door and invite me in,” she whispered.
First, I know this is fiction but you know that he would have sent her an email breaking it off.
And second please leave my Lakers out of your spurversions.
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
He would if she were an ex but im pretty sure she’s a vampire.
"We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of dreams." -Willy Wonka
I love olf’s self-critiques.
"Yes, it's important that I have good numbers, and I'm well-respected as a player. But I think it's more important that I'm respected as a man." - Some Tall Guy Who Wore #50
by theonlyromeo on Nov 26, 2009 8:17 PM CST up reply actions
Nah, the guy that writes these lives on the other side of the country from olf. But olf does have another SN, which I am not at liberty to divulge. :D
The Spurs - now playing defense again!
Yeah (-Rikkido- no wait, Tim C.) back when the Lakers were becoming the 2009 World Champions I was considering changing my login name. But there was too much inertia to overcome to change so for now I decided to go back to using just olf.
Although I must admit when I read through I couldn’t help Rec’ing some of my own stuff – it was so kick ass.
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
Thanks for reading
Thanks for a lot for reading. It’s really fun writing this stuff.
To the Lakers fan, I don’t know what to tell you, the train has left the station. Hopefully, some of those players will make it out human and alive. Not sure which ones yet.
Just trying to find a nice way to say leave my Lakers out of it. Or as they like to say in these here parts:
G. O. M. L. !!

“Get off my LAKERS punk!”
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
You have about as much of a chance at success with that request as the Nets had against the Lakers last night.
I have flying monkeys at my disposal, and I'm not afraid to use them.
Alas, it is tilting at windmills indeed. But someone has to try.
Here’s someone to put it in language that may be more familiar to you. (Or perhaps not.)

(Sorry but when I was a kid my folks had season tickets to the L A Music Center and had bunches of old soundtracks from the shows. That one in particular is burned into my brain.)
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
Short answer: Oh hells no! I was just translating it into lolcat language for her.
Longer answer: The quote itself is from an old-old-time musical loosely based on the novel Don Quixote. It is partially about a guy who goes crazy, and thinks he’s a knight and goes forth to fight imagined foes – or goes “tilting at windmills”.
If neither of those answers make sense: Then uh, never mind.
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
I knew it was from Man of La Mancha, but Lauri is usually the one to illustrate her feelings with lolcats. Yours was about perfect.
My people call it "sarcasm." - Lauri
Cool. Couldn’t find a good knight image so the cat seemed good.
My mom had a bunch of old soundtracks and would turn up the stereo while cleaning the house. I think I heard them all a billion times and to this day they make me think I should be vacuuming the living room or straightening my room.
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
Oh Olf… you know us. We touch on lots of different things at PtR.
Superman wears Manu Ginobili pajamas to bed. - CMoney
Oh OK, I’m still just catching up. I think it originally came out in the 60s so I thought it might not be as well knows as some others.
(I will also submit this version of a related song which I think is by Richard Kiley from the original Broadway cast. Not that it is necessarily best, but I think he did win a Tony award. And if you don’t like the music at least the artwork is cool.)
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."
by olf on Dec 1, 2009 1:27 AM CST up reply actions
I think one of my first off-topic posts here at PtR was about who did a better version of The Impossible Dream, Kiley or someone else whose name escapes me at the mo. . . . let me see if I can find it.
I have flying monkeys at my disposal, and I'm not afraid to use them.
Yeah, I saw that from Bella’s link above. I think they’re all good versions but I thought he deserved a mention.
If my parents had the soundtrack when I was a kid, then I pretty much know it backwards & forwards.
My wife took the kids to New York this summer (I couldn’t go dammit!) and they saw a couple of shows but I forget which ones.
The Lakers "Too big, too strong, too long, too good."

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